This week we have been working on using adjectives and descriptive language in writing.
This is going to help my audience visualise ( get a pic in their head).
Wow Mariam, what an amazing description you have written! I am thinking that Miss Percy is at the beach! Am I right? I really love the way that you have read out your writing, it meant that I could just focus on getting a picture in my head! The part about the cold water reminds me of my trips to the beach. I would much prefer to sit up on the warm sand than be in the cold water! Do you like swimming at the beach?
Wow Mariam, what an amazing description you have written! I am thinking that Miss Percy is at the beach! Am I right? I really love the way that you have read out your writing, it meant that I could just focus on getting a picture in my head! The part about the cold water reminds me of my trips to the beach. I would much prefer to sit up on the warm sand than be in the cold water! Do you like swimming at the beach?
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